Amazon Prime Day

Jul 15, 2015 16:12
Today is Amazon's prime day, and various goods are being discounted.

I checked them, and I decided to buy some goods, such as a Chromecast, a mouse, and a dryer.

Also, I could get 1000 yen gift points.

I'm now a little happy.

Amazon will sale MacBook Pro at a reduced price at 22:00, and I want to buy it.

However, since there are a lot of competition, it's difficult to get it.

Please give me a chance to buy the MacBook Pro.
No. 1　Timmy's correction
  • Also, I could get 1000 yen gift points.
  • Also, I could get 1000 yen worth of gift points.
  • I'm now a little happy.
  • I'm a bit happier now.
  • However, since there are a lot of competition, it's difficult to get it.
  • However, since there are a lot of competition, it's going to be difficult to get (your hands on one).
Nice!
kanotown
Thank you very much always for correcting me! :D
Timmy
You are welcome! ^_^
No. 2　Sharu's correction
  • However, since there are a lot of competition, it's difficult to get it.
  • However, since there's a lot of competition, it's going to be difficult to get it.
Did you get it ? ^^
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting me post! :)
Unfortunately I couldn't get it. Instead, I got a 3D printer at 90% off. hehe.
No. 3　Eddie's correction
  • Today is Amazon's prime day, and various goods are being discounted.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • I checked them, and I decided to buy some goods, such as a Chromecast, a mouse, and a dryer.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Amazon will sale MacBook Pro at a reduced price at 22:00, and I want to buy it.
  • Amazon will sell MacBook Pro at a reduced price of 22:00, and I want to buy it.
  • Please give me a chance to buy the MacBook Pro.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting my post! :D
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